This is soooo amazing! I love this! You had written everything perfectly! It pains me to read Harry like this but it's also very interesting. You'd done an amazing job, my dear.
I had no idea you were writing this. God, it's so good. It broke my heart but it was beautifully written. I love the Arctic Monkeys, too. I feel like there's more I want to say but I just can't think of anything.