Ramona and Julia - Comments

WingDing Gaster (100)

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This is cute. I love a good lesbian story.

September 14th, 2014 at 10:04pm

northern lights; (150)

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I really like this so far. You have a beautiful style of writing, and I can't wait to see the story play out :)

March 9th, 2014 at 08:09pm

Jordypye (1400)

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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh you updated! So cute~ I ship them so much >:3 Can't wait for an update, this chapter was good!

March 9th, 2014 at 12:24pm

Jordypye (1400)

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Summary:
I really like your layout and your summary is intriguing, I like that it sounds Shakespearean

First Chapter: I really like this twist on Romeo and Juliet, I've never liked the original version but I really like this so far, I like the first paragraph and how the reader gets told that Ramona does what she's expected to do.

Overall, I really want to read more, I didn't find any errors so concrit is pretty hard because this was a great introduction.

March 7th, 2014 at 04:16am

nihilist.cryptid (200)

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Its really hard to find good lesbian stories on here and this one is really fantastic. Update soon!

March 5th, 2014 at 04:13am