The Flower's Boy - Comments

Comment swap, oops. Sorry for the delay.
This is brilliant and I love your use of description - especially in the last paragraph - and how the sentences gradually became shorter and more rushed. It communicates the drug addict's need and hastiness in a way.
I can't really expand on this, unfortunately.
It's taken my breath - and words - away.

this was so trippy and dope
the way you wrote this was basically perfection I am in love

This was eerie, I love it, it's not too detailed so the reader can let his imagination "soar" but at the same time there's enough description to give us an image of what's happening I loved this, it's perfection

Whoa weird everything but I really liked this. I hope you have more to add soon!

I'm surprised that you wrote this and about this subject but it was excellently done.
The way you described both of the characters impacted the reading very much, especially because you could really feel the desperation with the one, and the smugness of the other.

The bag is smaller than the last time. It always seems to get less and less, but less is better than none. Some is better than nothing at all. Nothing at all.
That part is ridiculously truthful and raw and powerful. It shows how desperate one can get and how much they will do for what the want and need. I loved all of this.