Simple Hearts - Comments

  • k i w i

    k i w i (100)

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    Your layout is very beautiful. The only thing I don’t like is the shadow around the title.

    I really like this drabble because I can really relate to it. I agree that feelings from the heart are short, simple, and sweet. They’re to the point and don’t use excessive flowery language or a ton of literary devices. It’s a good point.

    I like that this piece has a clear purpose to it: to tell the person that you love them. That’s it. And really there’s nothing else that you would need to say. I enjoyed reading this and it did make me smile, so you accomplished what you were trying to do.

    Thanks for entering my contest!
    July 14th, 2014 at 06:40pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    I really like this piece! It's so short and simple, yet it so effectively conveys the feeling of love. Well done!

    I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine Cute
    April 1st, 2014 at 04:12am
  • celia.r.pendorra

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    Sweet but simple, and very easy to read. I like it!
    March 5th, 2014 at 01:47pm