July 14th, 2014 at 06:40pm
I really like this piece! It's so short and simple, yet it so effectively conveys the feeling of love. Well done!
I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine
I really like this drabble because I can really relate to it. I agree that feelings from the heart are short, simple, and sweet. They’re to the point and don’t use excessive flowery language or a ton of literary devices. It’s a good point.
I like that this piece has a clear purpose to it: to tell the person that you love them. That’s it. And really there’s nothing else that you would need to say. I enjoyed reading this and it did make me smile, so you accomplished what you were trying to do.
Thanks for entering my contest!