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  • living myth

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    you are seriously my favorite human ily
    thank you so much!
    April 1st, 2014 at 06:42am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    I really like the longer sentences and the repetition - it seems to highlight the emotions. I also liked the imagery of comparing falling in love with falling rain. Nice work!

    I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine Cute
    April 1st, 2014 at 04:17am
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