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  • Thatmom

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    In that case I love Star Trek. Great line. Lol
    March 24th, 2014 at 08:05pm
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    Someone should just shut Beth up, talk about an airhead, ugh
    March 20th, 2014 at 12:12am
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    @ Thatmom
    Thank you!
    March 19th, 2014 at 08:34pm
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    That was too funny with the locker room, good work! Very cute
    March 19th, 2014 at 07:30pm
  • Thatmom

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    I'm loving this story!!
    March 19th, 2014 at 06:22pm
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    @ Ladyfiaran
    Thank you for reading and commenting, I love feedback! : )
    March 14th, 2014 at 10:13pm
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    Olli and Hannah are so cute together, that's not my kind of movie either but I can't wait to read more Cool
    March 14th, 2014 at 09:09pm
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    @ Jjropes23
    : D Thank you!
    I meant to respond to your last comment too, but I forgot. Her 'attitude' will be addressed in a few chapters, but it mostly stems from the fact that she doesn't want to be there (though now she kinda does...)
    I'm glad you like it!!! Very Happy
    March 11th, 2014 at 04:12pm
  • Jjropes23

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    OUTSTANDING!! Chapter 3 made me smile and like Hannah a lot more. Good work so high five! I like the friendly bond you show between Brandon and Hannah. I suggest ballet flats heh.
    March 11th, 2014 at 03:49am
  • Thatmom

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    Great start:)
    March 8th, 2014 at 05:34am
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    I liked how well Hannah gets along with the guys and confused Geno is adorable, I wouldn't want to touch their hair either Very Happy And it's great to see Olli in a fic, he's a cutie and too bad the Pens lost to the damn sharks like that Sad
    March 7th, 2014 at 10:07pm
  • Jjropes23

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    Ok well first off, so far it's good and I look forward to see where you take this. I'm sorry though but to me personally Hannah came off as a bit unlikable in the second chapter but I'm sure you have a reason for that. It is great to see Olli finally getting some fan love because of how talented he is. Also that game had a lot of calls that should have been made against the sharks that weren't made for whatever reason. Oh! And I like the title, it fits very well!
    March 7th, 2014 at 07:19pm
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    This is a very interesting start, this is the first Maataa story I've read on here and it looks really good. I'd like to read more Mr. Green
    March 7th, 2014 at 01:15am
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