Film Strips and Hockey Sticks - Comments

In that case I love Star Trek. Great line. Lol

Someone should just shut Beth up, talk about an airhead, ugh

@ Thatmom
Thank you!

That was too funny with the locker room, good work! Very cute

I'm loving this story!!

@ Ladyfiaran
Thank you for reading and commenting, I love feedback! : )

Olli and Hannah are so cute together, that's not my kind of movie either but I can't wait to read more

@ Jjropes23
: D Thank you!
I meant to respond to your last comment too, but I forgot. Her 'attitude' will be addressed in a few chapters, but it mostly stems from the fact that she doesn't want to be there (though now she kinda does...)
I'm glad you like it!!!

OUTSTANDING!! Chapter 3 made me smile and like Hannah a lot more. Good work so high five! I like the friendly bond you show between Brandon and Hannah. I suggest ballet flats heh.

Great start:)

I liked how well Hannah gets along with the guys and confused Geno is adorable, I wouldn't want to touch their hair either And it's great to see Olli in a fic, he's a cutie and too bad the Pens lost to the damn sharks like that

Ok well first off, so far it's good and I look forward to see where you take this. I'm sorry though but to me personally Hannah came off as a bit unlikable in the second chapter but I'm sure you have a reason for that. It is great to see Olli finally getting some fan love because of how talented he is. Also that game had a lot of calls that should have been made against the sharks that weren't made for whatever reason. Oh! And I like the title, it fits very well!

This is a very interesting start, this is the first Maataa story I've read on here and it looks really good. I'd like to read more