Because I Love You - Comments

Can you please update!?

I really love it i'm glad you updated it cant wait for more

I really love it i hope you get time to update again soon

I love it I cant wait to see who it plays out

@ randomrebel
I know on the shortness of it and spelling mistakes and grammer as well, with some words I still get a bit iffy on it, and it sucks balls:/ thanks for the comment though, future chapters will most likely be longer, and I will try to see if I get the grammer and spelling correctly:)

The summary was good, a little fan girl like but still had potential. First chapter does need some work to be at the same standard. Its a bit short and there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes and just some weird phrasing.
Its a good start.