Because I Love You - Comments

  • C_Marie22

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    Can you please update!?
    February 19th, 2016 at 12:58pm
  • darkangelsasha

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    I really love it i'm glad you updated it cant wait for more
    October 24th, 2014 at 01:35pm
  • darkangelsasha

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    I really love it i hope you get time to update again soon
    September 2nd, 2014 at 11:21pm
  • darkangelsasha

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    I love it I cant wait to see who it plays out
    March 28th, 2014 at 11:33am
  • KillJoySynner

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    @ randomrebel
    I know on the shortness of it and spelling mistakes and grammer as well, with some words I still get a bit iffy on it, and it sucks balls:/ thanks for the comment though, future chapters will most likely be longer, and I will try to see if I get the grammer and spelling correctly:)
    March 18th, 2014 at 04:51am
  • randomrebel

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    The summary was good, a little fan girl like but still had potential. First chapter does need some work to be at the same standard. Its a bit short and there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes and just some weird phrasing.
    Its a good start.
    March 18th, 2014 at 04:45am