@ randomrebel I know on the shortness of it and spelling mistakes and grammer as well, with some words I still get a bit iffy on it, and it sucks balls:/ thanks for the comment though, future chapters will most likely be longer, and I will try to see if I get the grammer and spelling correctly:)
The summary was good, a little fan girl like but still had potential. First chapter does need some work to be at the same standard. Its a bit short and there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes and just some weird phrasing. Its a good start.