Under My Mask - Comments

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@ Unholy_Vengeance
I see your point. from the looks of it our lives are very different. my parents still live together. I have two siblings though all spoiled at some point. we even live in an area for around middle class families. but every life is mostly nice at some point. you can't ever have everything good but not everything bad either. it depends on how you look at it. I mean you can live wiith nothing but a single parent in a shitty place but I believe that you will still be able to find happiness if you want to. even though you don't have much you still seem happy. one of my friends has almost everything. loving parents with lots of money and all. she even has a dog. but she is still .
thanks for helping finding that documentarry I'll watch it when I get some time :)

@ JackieWepps
thank you :3 and I see what hers they may have it worse, other may have it better. Like with my moms income we're considered lower middle/working class though we live in technically a low class neighborhood. I have plenty more of what I need and Im grateful for it. Like Im honestly a bit spoiled, I guess you can say. I appreciate the value of everything and I don't want nothing but the most simple of things, but my mom does a lot for me since Im her only child (Now my father's a different story) but it's different for everyone. And another thing is people judge the area from the outside looking in, like the house and lawn looks like complete utter shit so people assume the family's on welfare when that's absolutely not the case. I've been over friends houses and the outside of their home may look terrible but you go inside it's like you've seen the cover of an interior magazine. No joke. And you can look the documentary on youtube or google videos or you can but the DVD off amazon or go to www.blackpowerproductions.com and you can also look up the history of Watts, which is where Compton is located near/at it's documentary called "The Fire This Time"

@ Unholy_Vengeance
well no prob. I like telling my oppinion anyway. I see what you mean and what it might mean to you. I am from around middle class myself so I don't know too much of the life below. my life is not easy in some other ways. but I have never tried the life of below middle class. never ever. but I love learning and I'd like to learn about it. I will think about looking at the documetary. but since I don't have Netflex do you have somewhere else I can find it?

@ Unholy_Vengeance
well no prob. I like telling my oppinion anyway. I see what you mean and what it might mean to you. I am from around middle class myself so I don't know too much of the life below. my life is not easy in some other ways. but I have never tried the life of below middle class. never ever. but I love learning and I'd like to learn about it. I will think about looking at the documetary. but since I don't have Netflex do you have somewhere else I can find it?

@ Unholy_Vengeance
well no prob. I like telling my oppinion anyway. I see what you mean and what it might mean to you. I am from around middle class myself so I don't know too much of the life below. my life is not easy in some other ways. but I have never tried the life of below middle class. never ever. but I love learning and I'd like to learn about it. I will think about looking at the documetary. but since I don't have Netflex do you have somewhere else I can find it?

@ Unholy_Vengeance
well no prob. I like telling my oppinion anyway. I see what you mean and what it might mean to you. I am from around middle class myself so I don't know too much of the life below. my life is not easy in some other ways. but I have never tried the life of below middle class. never ever. but I love learning and I'd like to learn about it. I will think about looking at the documetary. but since I don't have Netflex do you have somewhere else I can find it?

@ Unholy_Vengeance
well no prob. I like telling my oppinion anyway. I see what you mean and what it might mean to you. I am from around middle class myself so I don't know too much of the life below. my life is not easy in some other ways. but I have never tried the life of below middle class. never ever. but I love learning and I'd like to learn about it. I will think about looking at the documetary. but since I don't have Netflex do you have somewhere else I can find it?

@ JackieWepps
Thank you it means a lot :D and Compton is a community here in Los Angeles, California it has a bad reputation since its what the media puts out but it's an historical community! If you're interested about the history of the area and how it's perceived I guest watching a documentary called "Bastards of the Party" it's really good! You can search it up online or Netflix :) and I just wanted to give the readers a visual of what it's like for the majority who don't live in the upper class neighborhoods like me, I live with my mom in a two story apartment my neighborhood isn't safe but shit Im still living. My neighborhood is "Crip" territory and a block over is "Blood" territory, even though sometimes tensions my rise a bit but it's all good sometimes. I mean it's a lot of cultures and it's just a mixture of everything :) and thank you for being the first to comment on this chapter :D

good chapter. it gives a good picture of the lower class life. you really are good at this.
this Compot or whatever you called it sounds a lot like Nørrebro in Copenhagen. I've got so many warnings from my parents of going there and the media makes it sound like you get shot if you take a step in there but I've been there a couple of thimes and nothing happened. I mean as far as I know I'm still alive and well xD but some people do get shot in there.

@ Vengeance_of_Shadows
yeah I see your point. it's great.

@ andybiersacklover
Thanks for being the fourth to comment :) and Im glad to have sparked interest with my work :D

@ SelfishArrogance
Thanks for being the 2nd commenter :D and I had this story swarming in my head, Im trying to outline it now so it'll be written and seen the way I want it to be for my auidence. I'll try to update as fast as I can but school's an hassale so I'll do my best!

@ JackieWepps
Thanks for being the third to comment :D and I appreciate the feedback :3 and sorry for the big vocabulary, I'll do my best to use simplirr words bit I can't guarantee it. Im a very grammatical person and I want the overall font of tbis story to hold an professional vibe sonce it's going to be some real shot going on. But I'll try :) and look at it this way, Im helping you with you're vocabulary XD that way, if you're still, in school your teacher can't give you shit about the words XD

this is a really interesting story i really wanna see how it turns out

poor Jinxx. I don't get how his father can be so blind that he can't see that his son is being hurt by his actions. I mean if he can't he that he must be compleetly physically blind!. that father is such an idiot.
really good writing to you :) though I kinda wish you would use a few less difficult words. cause English is not my first language and I don't want to look one or two words up pr sentence. if you made it a bit more for everyone.. but it seem to be really good. I look forward to read about the others.
oh yeah BTW another thing in Jinxx's story. you really thought it through. it's amazing.

@ Vengeance_of_Shadows
Haha ok, just CC being upset just makes me upset. So does Ashley but not as much as CC.

i kind of like how the fisrst chapter went, im pretty interested on where this could go, please, update soon

@ iloveandybiersack1
Thank you for being the first to comment <(^.^)> *huggles* and don't worry it'll have some nonsomber moments in here don't be aftaid!....Be VERY afraid! Lol jk but for a SPOILER ALERT: it's a bit more agression than depression for CC but that's all you get >.> and yes you'll need some tissues though v.v