The Brave Ones - Comments

I just discovered this recently and finally caught up to the most recent chapter and I'm shedding tears. I've been reading this whenever I had the chance through every small break of my day and I've even stayed up at night just to squeeze enough chapters before I sleep, and let me just say how wonderful this is! I'm completely attached and in love with the characters and their development throughout the whole story and I really, sincerely hope you finish this because there are so many questions. I.e. What happens with Zale now? Does Ragnarok ever surface? What becomes of Atticus and everyone else? You're a very talented writer and this particular work has given me a roller coaster of feels.

Wow! I just recently discovered this story and feel as though I've been missing out! I love it so, so much. The character development is incredible. You have a way with words that I can only dream about, haha. Keep it up! :)

Love all of this. Im in love with Zale's character development and Niko's. I'm glad they aren't just like, "it's okay, I still love." I love the struggle. All the internal struggle, it's so real for a fantasy story. Keep writing!

Aahhhh so much is happening! I can't wait for more! Such a good cliffhanger. I need to know what is happening!!

I'm so sorry I haven't been commenting recently. I got busy and got behind in my reading. But holy crap did I miss a lot! And it's all crazy and amazing. Baahhh. I can't wait until the next update. I hope you have fun while you're away though! I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. :)

love this story was kind of in a good shock by the splitting and i really like it. showing both her human and spirit side but it still being one without missing a beat. cant wait on the next one:) have fun writing :)

love this story was kind of in a good shock by the splitting and i really like it. showing both her human and spirit side but it still being one without missing a beat. cant wait on the next one:) have fun writing :)

@ khuckles
I'm sorry for the many splits >< It's just, it gets a little hard to connect some parts together and I like to alternate between different characters... I'll try to work on it! Thanks for commenting and I'm so glad I managed to shock you :< :D:D

Wow! I didn't even think about the split that would happen when the Senator removed her spirit. What a twist! I do hope that you update soon!

I love the splits in the scenes by chapter, but sometimes they are dramatic enough that after not reading for a short while, I have to revisit to make sure I'm even on the right one, and haven't missed something.
Great writing!

Gahhhhh there is NEVER a dull moment is there? I hope they all get out of there safely! <3

I love the twists in this! It's so exciting, and when I'm done reading a chapter I always wish there was another one to read.
Also cliffhanger, so uh there's that. IS NIKO OK, OH MY GOD I NEED TO KNOW NOWWW.

I love this.

Yes! Yes! I love Atticus and Niko and Ping and Zale. And Saffi is so ugghhh.
I love this!!

@ Call_me_Dot
holy cow you read fast. Thanks for your support though :D

@ Call_me_Dot
holy cow you read fast. Thanks for your support though :D

I definitely see spinoffs in the future!

I actually adored this chapter. I'm so worried about Zale, and I think you do a great job showing how tense and nervous the whole prophecy makes them! I can't wait to see how things play out! <3

I love the character development! and I think the first person for Zale's memories works really well. I can be jarring in some stories but it really seems to work for this one! GAH I love your characters!

I think its crazy he admitted he'd love her less cause I doubt it and Mann poor zale I'm so.happy she's alive though

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't have anything else to say. Except that I love this and:

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@ dys-functional
Thank you! That means a ton. Character development is one of my favorite parts of writing. And yours is GREAT. It's just like Khuckles said, I love how they stay true to character throughout everything that happens to them. That is really really hard to do (I struggle with it all the time!)

I seriously adore this story. And I think it's hilarious (and awesome!) that we're fangirling over each others stories! <3