The Brave Ones - Comments

@ Call_me_Dot
Ping's my sweetheart heheh, it won't happen again!

@ khuckles
I'm so glad that I managed to pull it off. Phew because I love Zale so much as a female warrior and I was hoping her honesty with Niko and everything around her wouldn't get messed up into like typical-save-my-butt vulnerability. So your comment means a lot to me and I'm so glad you're enjoying my story!

@ Rebell
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoy The Moor (or Atticus) because he's like sassy and strong, and that is very attractive in a friend haha! Also I'd also like to tell you that YOUR character development for your stories are amazing and it inspires me to work harder on my characters

Yay!! I am so happy that you have updated so.much in the last 24 hours. It makes me so excited when I check my phone. You're doing a great job-despite the additions of love and friendship, the characters haven't lost their integrity. I love when an author is able to pull that off. So often, a girl has sex and then becomes this wimpy goofy thing in stories-even in action. I like that Zale has changed, but is still herself.

I hope you post soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

I really should stop commenting on this story since I'm like saying the same things over and over, but I'm not going to because I know how motivational comments are!
I adore your characters, all of them, and i'm really really glad Zale and The Moor are reunited. It's nice that she'll have someone on her side there, because she definitely needs it.

AHHHHHHHH WHY?
Also oh my god I wish I could write sex scenes like you because then I would actually write them! Not a bad writer, this story is amazing. BUT WHYYYY? WHYY PING WHYY?
Oh god. Can you update like, uhm, now? Because this is...oh god.
Why can't they just be happy!? (which is totally what people keep asking me too, haha).

Nooooooo!!

@ Rebell
YOUR COMMENTS MAKE ME SO HAPPY!!!! I'm a really big fan of your The Elite series as well :B *fangirls* and I'm pretty honoured that you're so stoked about my story! haha!! Yeah... things are gonna start looking grim for Zale and Niko now :(

I don't understand why more people don't comment on this because it's SO good. WHY PEOPLE WHY?
In other news I'm glad they're finally accepting their relationship regardless of what anyone else thinks, because they are perfect.
<3

@ Rebell
Awww thanks! Things are gonna start heating up though!

I didn't think that chapter was filler at all! It showed a lot of their relationship and their character development. I really liked it!!

@ khuckles
Thank you so much! I know... I always try to edit my work but I still miss up a few words here and there. When I re-read my writing and I find a mistake, it drives me crazy to have to edit them and STILL MISS OUT mistakes. But I'm so glad you enjoy my story :) It's nice hearing that especially since it's my first time trying out fantasy-genre writing.

This story is awesome!! And the fact that you post so often is even awesomer! I love the story line- I wasn't sure how it was all going to connect up at first, but now I marvel at the build up.

If you reread a bit of it, you might notice a couple of words you want to switch (happens to me when I'm typing too fast as well), because I'm pretty sure you meant something different.

Incredibly excited to keep reading! The last line of your last chapter was hilarious to me, I don't know why. Hahah.
-->"Niko rolled his eyes as The Moor finally conceded to their group’s inherent trust issues."

Great story!

@ Rebell
Thank you thank you! I'm in one of those writing moods again haha! I'm sure we're all attracted to his sassy-ness :B

I love the development of Zale and Niko's relationship. There is never a dull moment in this and I always wish there was another chapter after the one I read. I also really adore The Moor. I'm not sure why. But I do.

@ Rebell
Thank you so much!! If you could give some opinions and thoughts on the coming chapters, that would be great :D:D

I just want you to know that I am legit in love with this story (ok so I already told you that) and I'm hooked, seriously.

@ dys-functional
Makes sense!
Well, it's amazing.

@ Rebell
because I just started 2 days ago! haha! But thank you :)

I love this. How has no one commented on it? How?
It's awesome!