The Runt Wearing Silk - Comments

I think you should definitely continue this because its pretty cool idea. The only advice I have for you is to just read over what you write because theirs a lot of errors concerning spelling, accidental point of view change, or just like awk sentences. Other then that I think if you keep going and keep the writing mature and clean this could be really good :) It definitely sparked my curiosity

Can't wait to read more. It was off to a great start:)

I think this story has a lot of potential, and I can't wait to see where it goes.