Oh wow i;ve missed alot.Sorry this weeek has been busy for me ! But anyway love the new updates. Im kind of happy she didnt get stuck with Carol LOL. :) update sooon
I really like this chapter. When carmen went off with Carol i thought oh dear they will both get lost in the tombs. Im so glad you decided that carmen took a different path. I love reading this story.
This a great story so far but in this chapter especially Carmen is a little annoying with the whole "I can help. I'm strong, I got my own back" thing she seems to be doing constantly.
wow that last chapter was really great.. i really want to find out more on carmen's past. and i hope you figure out the whole job thing.. i can relate to the "stuck" feeling that you described in the author note. goodluck and cant wait to see whats next. :)
wow i really liked this chapter. the whole brother thing has me a little confused. but i really enjoyed carmen and daryls little incident.... theyre so cute lol. cant wait to see what you have coming up next :)
hey sorry I've been so sick i never got a chance to get on and catch up. but I'm happy I finally did. It's good to see you put a little twist on the original story and added your own stuff in ! can't wait to see what happens when they go to the camp and also how the motel holds up. oh and if they are gonna find Melanie's dad there ?! im so curious lol , can't wait to see what's next :)