Dark Side - Comments

Look at you writing again and shit! Maybe you will be able to get back into the swing of things as I know you used to love it!

This chapter was definitely very dark..I am definitely wondering what in the world is going on with Matt that has him acting this way; whtat caused this dark side ya know? I loved the detail...I could envision everything perfectly! Finding a hooker, he is really putting himself out there for his wife, friends, and fans to find out! But I guess when he threatens to kill them the way he did then they probably stay quiet!

I love the descriptions of even mentioning how dry she was to show that she wasn't turned on by the things he was doing! And it didn't seem to phase him none. That had to hurt big time!

I am wondering how long this will go on before he gets caught by someone! I am so excited to see why he is the way he is and I am so excited to see you writing again!

Great job! Keep up the great writing!

I really like this!

so far i like it ;) i can see it's from 2014, but as a one-shot it would be pretty good too!

I'm finding it extremely difficult to vocalize how I feel about this story. But I'll try my best.
Here goes: This is perfectly worded to the point I can clearly picture every detail. The glispe of darkness in Matt is dangerous yet it's impossible to not fall in and become completely consumed. It's very refreshing to see Matt taken to a deep dark abyss. It begs the question; how dark is Matt really?

I ABSOLUTELY look forward to reading more!

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I am liking this a lot!

Ohh, I'm liking this!

I agree, everyone glorifies these men to the point where they are made out to be gods, they're just guys, humans. This kind of thing probably goes on all the time, it's just never talked about.

Great opening to the story, looking forward to more! :D

OMG where do I begin! I absolutely LOVED this! The way you described things, the wording you used...it was all so perfect to me! I pictured everything so perfectly, it was like you didn't leave a single detail out! I actually loved that she got pleasure from it because sometimes the body can betray you and give in when you don't really want to...although I know it isnt like that in all cases!

I love that Matt is a bad boy in this story with some serious issues! I loved that he seemed to prey on a fan in this chapter! I wonder if that will be a thing of his?

Oh i wonder if Val will find out and what will happen if she does! Or if the guys find out? OMG I just need more now! Like right now! I mean this was so amazing! And I understand rape shouldnt turn me on but the description you used well yeah...hahahah!

I loved it baby and I know you are nervous about writing about this topic but I know you will do amazingly! Love you, Stephie!