July 7th, 2014 at 12:24am
@ HawkGul93
thats because its the epilogue. the story is over
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July 6th, 2014 at 11:28pm
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I like the concept of the story, but you jump around a lot... Like what, she has kids already? They didn't even make it to Philly.... I would try adding more details, we can't see what's inside your mind..July 5th, 2014 at 03:24pm
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Yay!!! A girl:)July 5th, 2014 at 05:21am
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Yay!!! She's going to Philly!!!June 26th, 2014 at 05:12am
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Glad she remembered her promise of spontaneity :)June 2nd, 2014 at 12:36am
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Great chapter:)May 20th, 2014 at 01:32pm
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Just found your story and cant wait for moreMay 20th, 2014 at 05:20am
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Loved that the cookout went so well!!!May 13th, 2014 at 10:31pm
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The hometown visit is going well so far:)May 5th, 2014 at 10:17pm
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Loved it!!!!April 26th, 2014 at 09:42pm
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:)April 8th, 2014 at 05:13am
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Can't wait for more!!!April 1st, 2014 at 03:25pm
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Just found this and love it:)March 25th, 2014 at 12:34pm
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I really love this so far!March 18th, 2014 at 04:43am
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I really love this so far!March 18th, 2014 at 04:43am
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I really love this so far!March 18th, 2014 at 04:43am
Oh. Well you didn't say it was the epilogue... I had no idea. I meant for the whole story though, the whole thing is written with some time gaps and missin info...
Like I said though, good concept, just ideas for the future: the reader cannot read your mind. And more detail can be better than less