Yellow Dress - Comments

Tipsy. (100)

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OMG. I never thought I'd read something so sweet on mibba. Definitely one of the best oneshots I've read. Simply adorable, though initially I thought the woman would be some illegitimate older sister that Tomlinson was accepting lol

March 26th, 2014 at 06:27am

lumosmancer (150)

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WOAH WHAT
Aw...

That was adorable!

March 18th, 2014 at 07:53pm

semisweet. (100)

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Age:: 36
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This was so tragic and beautiful! Now I'm all emotional.

March 15th, 2014 at 11:52pm

luke ham ham. (100)

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Oh my god I loved it!!
Definitely wasn't expecting that part at the end!
Great job! :D

March 15th, 2014 at 04:12pm

Bangarang! (120)

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Age:: 29
Location:: Australia

OH MY GOD,

that was amazing, seriously, the whole twist at the end was great, you have a wonderful writing style. It's so beautiful and flows so easily and beautifully Oh gosh! I'm speechless, I have no words honestly absolutely wonderful one shot! I love it. so so so so so much

March 15th, 2014 at 03:56pm

Chairman Meow (925)

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Age:: 32
Location:: Malaysia

This is amazing!!!!

It's just... gah! It's full of emotions. Like how your words build up right until the ending. It's just perfect! Louis!!! YOU'RE SO SWEET AND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, DEAR!!

As usual, Fira, you amaze me with your writing skill.

March 15th, 2014 at 03:54pm