Unwanted and Obscure - Comments

Chapter was too short! I need more lol. I think zayn will go all crazy on her parents!! He is a bad guy but maybe we will see the better side to him as he shows her more affection! Keep up the great work!

@ lillybeth123
Yay!!!! I'm so excited, I'm glad your still interested and hooked! I should be putting out regular updates at least once a week if my twice because I have a lot of free time on my hands!

Ummmm mm I'm still interested! Please continue and never leave me again! !!I'm hooked!!

@ Norman Reedus
Thank you soooo much! I'm glad you like it, you should check out my other story Beautiful Disaster as well then I actually like it a bit better than this one but I will update this one tonight for you!

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS. it is so much my style and I love gang stories /bad boy ones like this one, I love how it's written and how things are played out so far! Update aoon!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

@ StellaBella
AWWW thanks! I'm gonna try and have another update out tonight and I'm gonna start a posting schedue so you can know when to expect an update! :)

First off thank you so much for the shout out you are so sweet. Second as always the update was great and I'm dying for another one I just can't be satisfied… :) You are doing wonderful darling!

Really good update! I saw a few run ons, but other than that it was really good!

@ madamUnco87
I'm so glad you liked the chapter and are still reading considering it took me so long to update! But yeah Zayn doesn't leave her many options, but I love how he kind of just pops up everywhere especially when she thinks she's safe.

He is very unpredictable!

Sounds like she doesn't have a choice in the matter, what he wants...he gets.

Great chapter, thanks for taking the time to update :)

Please Please Please update soon!!!

@ StellaBella
Sorry I haven't updated my internet has been down and it won't let me post from my phone for some reason :( I should have my internet back up by the end of this week do expect an update on Friday!

Update soon please!!

I love stories about dark zayn! Keep up the good work :)

I really like this story! I love the thought of a gang running the town and not even the cops are brave enough to stop them. And this gang can beat up whoever and no one can stop them because they are just that high.
The characters are well developed and I really like how you are portraying Zayn.
I've noticed that this story has a lot of run on sentences though. It makes the story a bit confusion and hard to read. Also, there are quite a few grammer mistakes. I would be happy to help you out and fix them, making your already terrific story even better.
Please update soon though!

Finally got to read this chapter it was great I can't wait for another update!!!!!!!

I was wondering how long it would take him to slap her, knew he'd have to snap eventually.

That sucks that you only got 2 comments, but I'm glad they made you happy...and you updated....yay!!! Can't wait to read more....curious to know what's to come

@ StellaBella
I'm so glad you like it I'm going to go ahead and update it again probably tonight, trust me if it was my birthday i would have been intoxicated too haha XD

Thank you so much for updating on my birthday! I got a notification last night but I was slightly….intoxicated haha so I had to wait tell this morning. It is wonderful keep going it's so addicting I keep re reading it!