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  • mgn.

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    honestly, I'd love to see a sequel!
    April 28th, 2016 at 11:18am
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    @ TeeHeeiSpawned
    You're very welcome :) Thank you for always commenting! It definitely helped me finish this lol
    April 11th, 2015 at 05:01pm
  • TeeHeeiSpawned

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    I loved this story very much. Thank you for writing it and never giving up. :D
    April 11th, 2015 at 03:51pm
  • LiacideXIII

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    Well then, that was a fantastic ending and I'm glad that I started reading this one. It really has come so far and I am glad that you were able to finish it. Congrats once more!
    April 10th, 2015 at 11:09am
  • LiacideXIII

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    Oh, Oh shit! That is exciting for them! They are so adorable! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
    April 9th, 2015 at 07:17pm
  • CartoonBanshee

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    GET IN THS GAME QUINN AND LAVINA dayuuuum I love this story :') it's so perfect :3
    April 9th, 2015 at 06:47pm
  • TeeHeeiSpawned

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    Oh my goodness. oh my goodness. :D Quinn and Lavina are just so sweet and cute together. Thank you for updating!!
    April 9th, 2015 at 05:32pm
  • CartoonBanshee

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    oh my god i hate nathan
    April 1st, 2015 at 10:18pm
  • TeeHeeiSpawned

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    Yes! You go Quinn! Thank you for the update.
    March 31st, 2015 at 02:39pm
  • LiacideXIII

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    Yeah! Go Quinn!
    She is badass!
    I like her a lot!
    I'm glad she was there to protect her!
    Can't wait for more!
    March 31st, 2015 at 06:25am
  • TeeHeeiSpawned

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    I hate guys like her father. I've had my fair share; even my own dad for a while. Things did get better but it took a long time. Thank you for the update :D
    March 20th, 2015 at 05:28pm
  • Divine  Faery

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    Well I'll say first that I didn't find any mistakes though I am not a grammar expert so unless the mistake was obvious or something I had been advised on myself I wouldn't be able to catch it.

    The beginning is kind of sad I hate that the father is cheating and while I can't in anyway excuse cheating the drinking I can probably understand since he is a psychiatrist be probably has a lot of stress, other people's emotional and mental issues can rub off on people and wear you down and who knows what he knows and unlike his patients he can't talk to anyone about what he knows.

    I understand why the mother is leaving and why the daughter has to go with her, but the daughter had a point though it's not like the mother had any other options, because staying just wasn't one of them.

    Good job.
    March 16th, 2015 at 10:27pm
  • LiacideXIII

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    Her dad is just a stupid dick UGH the nerve of him, that is some bullshit for sure! Can't wait for more!
    March 16th, 2015 at 10:19pm
  • LiacideXIII

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    Her dad is just a stupid dick UGH the nerve of him, that is some bullshit for sure! Can't wait for more!
    March 16th, 2015 at 10:18pm
  • LiacideXIII

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    That would be extremely awkward indeed, kudos for him for trying though most wouldn't even care to try again. I just remembered as I was starting to type out the comment that I could use this for the comment a thon and was like ahhh what the hell. I do like how the story has developed so far, I remember I started the first chapter a couple times before I got myself to actually sit down and focus on reading it. Not that I didn’t like the material, more of my mind likes to wonder sometimes on originals because it’s overly used to fanfiction. This is definitely one of my favorites of your though! I can’t find any mistakes, which is a good thing and you’re moving this along at a great pace! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
    March 7th, 2015 at 07:47pm
  • TeeHeeiSpawned

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    I hope things get better but I have a feeling things are only going to get worse before they are better. Thank you for the update :D
    March 7th, 2015 at 02:31pm
  • TeeHeeiSpawned

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    Awe I agree with CartoonBanshee they are just so adorable. :D Thank you for the update. Waiting patiently for the next chapter. <3
    March 1st, 2015 at 02:46pm
  • CartoonBanshee

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    could they get any cuter omg :')
    March 1st, 2015 at 02:06pm
  • LiacideXIII

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    Here is for hoping this all goes well O_o
    Something tells me there is going to be some bad luck happening.
    Can't wait for more though!
    March 1st, 2015 at 05:03am
  • TeeHeeiSpawned

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    Oh boy I wonder what will happen there O.O... Thank you for updating. :D
    February 23rd, 2015 at 07:12pm