Lover Boy - Comments

This was seriously such a unique plot I wish you had only made it longer because when I finished, I wished I hadn't. Both a good and bad thing I suppose. Kudos, so many kudos.

People will go to great lengths for those they love, and this just shows it more. I like how you used the flashbacks and also the fact that Jeremy changed his hair just for Owen. Then although they love Christina as a sister they can't let their love go. Great.

This is great, absolutely great. I can't hate these two for going behind his sister's back and his girlfriend's. They are in love, and love is mad. This is one of the best stories I've ever read, I can honetsly give you that.

This is pure GOLD, do I need to say more? The feelings of the characters and how they couldn't handle what was developing between them as well as the thought of hurting their loved person, Christina. You amazed me yet again.

I honestly love this. I agree with the comments below. This is so unique, and I love how you used the lyrics. I love Owen even though you probably shouldn't because he is a cheater. I just can't help it. He's just so loveable. I didn't expect anything less than a beautiful masterpiece from you!

I agree with both commenters below me. This was so different and unique, I wanted it to keep going! I feel so bad for Owen even though he's the bad guy in this story; he's just so likable. I think you did a wonderful job with this dear. Thanks so much for entering my contest you always write such masterpieces!

I can honestly say I've never read anything like this before! This story really surprised me with the way Jeremy were keeping things a secret. It's a strange thing because you want to feel bad for them that they only have that night together, but at the same time Owen is still cheating on Christina... It's a tough one!

Girl, this was really good. I feel sad for Owen and Jeremy though having to wait for Christina to dump Owen so they can be together. I love that they had that night together and that they love each other. It's a sweet story and I'm sure one day they'll be together again.