Bright Lights - Comments

Update?

So happy to see this updated:)

<3
FINALLY.
After all these years of being like, "WOULD YOU JUST LET YOUR CHARACTER BE HAPPY FOR ONCE?" i'm doing a party dance over here.
Just...yes. :D

Ack, the cliffhanger!!

hmm wonder what was said

I love how you are incorporating the Blackhawks into this story. They are my favorite, You just can't go wrong with the hawks and the pens. :)

I loveeee how you're making Jon and Audi's relationship.
I'm so in love with this story♡ can't wait for more chapters!

Sid has to dance with her

I really love this story. :)

Not out of character.. some girls are vulnerable or have a soft side while they are sick

It would be funny if she showed up to the game wearing the penguin jacket with a blackhawk jersey, but you mainly see the penguins. and someone from blackhawk yells traitor at her in joke.

adorable, but i think that her friends on the hawks will be a little pissed with her. I also dont find what she did out of character, all girls have a soft side that wants to be taken care of, sometimes it takes getting sick to let t out.

aww poor Sid. Seems like she doesn't have those types of feelings for Jon at least anymore. I think Sid and her would be cute

I'm so in love with this already. :)

I love it! I haven't really read anything with a fighter in it so this will be a new experience for me. Keep Up the great work.

really loving this story and how sid acts in it. xx

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cute.. Anyone find it funny though that the people who get the discounts on stuff typically don't need them to afford it. I mean movie stars and stuff get sent free stuff all the time to ware.

Not saying they don't deserve it with how hard they work and all.

love it..

I do love Sidney Crosby, so this was very easy to read! I have never, ever read a story with a fighter... let alone a girl fighter, so you did a really great job with making both your character and your story unique! I think it'll be neat to see how her characteristics as a fighter affect her relationship with Sidney in the future - they'll definitely be an interesting pair!