The First-Ever Malik Murder-Mystery Extravaganza - Comments

God, I am in LOVE with this. This is hands down the best piece I've read on this site in ages. Wow.

First point. It's a Louis fic. Have I told you how much I LOVE a Louis fic? I think I've mentioned that a couple of times at the club thread.

Second point. The summary is very interesting. Quite funny and witty. Just gotta LOVE Hazza. And makes me so interested to read MORE!!

Third point. This is an AU! Oh my God! You have no idea how refreshing it is to read stories where the boys aren't in a famous boy band. So kudos to you for making this!!!

Fourth point. The banter between Harry and Zayn was just hilarious. I can imagine how frustrated Zayn was with all the questions and just wanna kill someone like RIGHT ABOUT NOW!! Lol!

Fifth point. I love the interaction between Louis and Canary. She seems like an interesting character and I would really love to know about her. What's she doing? How did she and Lou meet? (if you'd mentioned it earlier, maybe I'd missed it. sorry)

And the last and final point that sky-rocketed your points to 100 points is the ending! (I'm not even sure since when I start this whole point system thing ) Urgh!!! I'm a total sucker for open-ending like that and you're doing a perfect job on it. Just!!

I love this whole story. The interaction between the characters. The wits. The sarcasm. The personality. And the humor. You grasp everything so well and I'm just at loss of words. Ah... that's a lie. I'm obviously rambling on your comment so there's no way I'm at loss of words now, am I?

Anyway, great story!!! It's a one-shot, isn't it?

OH MY GOD. DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE CLUE? HOW I PLAYED THAT GAME SO MANY TIMES AS A KID I WORE IT OUT AND HAD TO BUY A NEW ONE? HOW I CAN RECITE THE WHOLE MOVIE AND I LOVE IT SO MUCH, CHEESY AS IT IS? WHY AM I STILL TYPING IN ALL CAPS? AH WELL. BRILLIANT.