Andy is suck a DICK!!!!!!!! if only I'd got what it took to kill him I'd fucking do it. I don't give a fucking DAMN what Ashley will think Andy is going down!!! oh GOD I HATE HIM! why can't he see what he is doing? DICK!!!!!! that's all. that felt good. thanks for nice chapters.
why does all lovestories starts to make me want to have a boyfriend. I'm 17 and have never had a fucking boyfriend T-T anyway it's a really good story. I think it caught me :) not too long chapters, (not too short either) and I can easilly understand. your writing is good. I can't say about the plot yet but it seems like it's gonna be great :)
i guess its fine if it works that way! I'm interested on what might happen, don't be scared of writing longer chappies!!! i bet they wont be as bad as you think,
@ SelfishArrogance Well I sad in the little note after chapter two that it was in a way based off my past relationship because its... Quite the story. And I know that people usually don't fall in love that quick but trust me on this, I did ;-; haha so there's that. And I'll work on it more today :) Thanks for your feedback c:
i don't know if i like or if i don't yet, though andley is always good. i'll advise u just one thing, people don't fall in love that quickly!!! maybe andy is crushing on ashley but it is not love yet!!! I'm telling u this just to make it a bit realist! but is your fic, you can whatever you want with it i guess... and if you believe in love at first sight....
anyway! update soon hon! i really like the idea, and i already don't like Ashley's parents ):