Sorry about the long delay, but here I am (: To be honest, this scared me. It was so intense, not to mention, so well written that... Simply splendid. I pity Alan, but you're one heck of a writer! Keep it up :)
This was frighteningly intense for such a short piece. Poor Alan. /cries But the language used, the little details like him bloodying his own jaw. Poor baby boy.
To be honest, this scared me. It was so intense, not to mention, so well written that... Simply splendid. I pity Alan, but you're one heck of a writer! Keep it up :)