I really like the concept of this story and it's quite well written. I'm not sure the Merrikat would work but that's just my opinion, do what you think is best. :)
I don't know about the Merrikat because like you've already introduced characters and jack has shown a lot of interest in Alex and then to just throw in that he has a boyfriend already? I dunno how well that would work you know. That's just my opinion tho you can do whatever you want because it's your story so yeah I LOVE THIS SO FAR THO
@ alltimehoes Sorry, I'm gonna try to have another chapter up tonight. I got a crap load of homework dumped on me on Tuesday, and I've been working extra to pay for a concert I'm going to. Sorry about the lack of updates :/