July 13th, 2014 at 04:02am
The opening to the story was marvelous and the way like someone else said, it seems to immediately jump into action, was also marvelous. Although this typically wouldn't be my cup of tea I did enjoy the chapters I read. The flow of everything was nice and smooth so I didn't see much of anything wrong with it.
My only complaint is the size of the font on the layout because I could barely read it but that could be me because my sight kind of sucks. The layout on that note was simply, eye pleasing (besides the font) and went well with the story.
My only complaint is the size of the font on the layout because I could barely read it but that could be me because my sight kind of sucks. The layout on that note was simply, eye pleasing (besides the font) and went well with the story.