A Kind of Contradiction - Comments

I was thinking about this story today and how much i miss it! Looking forward to whenever you update it!

Updateeeeeee ! I love this story & can't wait to see what happens when Danny finds out ! Please update soon !

SAGRADA FAMILIA
NOW I'M THINKING ABOUT WATER AND A STAR
AND HARRY STYLES
GOD DAMMIT, LOU
NASH AND COSIMA OH MY GOD I'M DYING
ALL THE SNEAKING AROUND HAS ME EVEN MORE HYPED ON THEIR RELATIONSHIP ;)))

Thanks for updating! I gobbled that chapter right up.

Hey. This story is like you, great and amazing. :)

omg i love Nash and Patrick's super tiny banter
but i'm so glad that Patrick's so understanding of Cosima's situation, even if there were a few jabs in there (((((:
alsO NASH'S "AWARD WINNING SELF-CONTROL" MY ASS LOOOOOOOOOL
maybe around other people, but sure as hell not Cosima ;)))

I cannot tell you how amazed I am by this story. You have a natural talent for writing, and for creating characters. Cosima, especially, grabbed my heart in the first few paragraphs. I have only had time to make it through the first chapter, but I am unbelievably excited to continue. There is not a single thing I can find to give constructive criticism on; your grammar is excellent, your plot line is developed, your characters are personable, and your theme is perfect for the story. I'll definitely be recommending this to friends.
Best wishes!

NASH
BAE
ILU
GOOD JOB W/ DANNY BC HE WAS BEING A DICK AND NEEDED TO BE PUT IN HIS PLACE
ugh i just really love Cosima and Nash and i feel like Lucia knows, yes, but she'll care a little less bc i'm sure she just wants what's best for Cosima and she wants her to be happy (((((:

When the day Danny finds out about Nash and Cosima, all hell is going to break loose! I'm loving waiting for that day and I'm not because I like this sneaking around thing going on but then I don't because Nash and Cosima should be together openly and freely and FEEELSS!!!

YO???? LIKE???? Danny reminds me a lot of my brother (not just bc of laundry detergent/pizza/weed combination) because like my brother and I are always at odds and we argue sometimes but whenever I have a problem he's like THERE in a second and vice versa and like I do love that kid so yeah. I feel ~connected~ to Cosima because we both know that brothers are annoying as shit but kinda cool too.
ANYWAYS so yo I feel like soon Nash and Cosima are gonna get caught and omg I'm ready for it I love this

I'M IN LOVE WITH LUCIA
SHE'S SO ALL-KNOWING
oh my gOODNESS YESSSSSSSSS
COSIMA AND NASH YES YES EYS
I'M FREAKING OUT BC HE WAS SO
idk man him like just slipping into her room seems so dom for some reason????? like is it weird for me to think that??

This chapter had my mouth hanging down! It was just too much emotions and CASH feels for me to handle! I need more ASAP to survive!

LORD ALMIGHTY, please don't leave me hanging like this, i am dying, i am so attracted to a fictional character it hurts and it's all your fault. this story is insanely written and i cannot wait for the next update

FREAKING CASH!!!!

We get a hot makeout, I'm happy of course, but then they say "Nothing has changed!" My shipper heart can only take so much! I seriously hope she is going to him now so they can be together and have cute little money babies. I'm in love with their name though, Cash. It's so cute and brillant! Just like this story. c;

I literally just binge read this WHOLE thing and WHY DIND"T I READ IT BEFORE?!
God I'm soooo in love with Nash and Cosima. I'm so happy that something might start to happen? Like I just want it to soooo badly. Although, I am a little upset that she didn't really have feelings for Patrick, I really liked him too. God, I can't imagine how Danny is gonna react once he finds out about Cosima and Nash????

I'll take Patrick

I really like this story.

Pretty chill story so far, can't wait to see more developments on your take of the love triangle that is taking place.

YAAAAAAAAAS NASH JUST MAKE OUT WITH HER

NOOOOOOO PATRICK OH MY GOD
WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME I HATE YOU
THIS IS SO SAD
PATRICK IS SO UNDERSTANDING AND HE'LL WAIT FOR COSIMA OMFG
LAUREL YOU TERRIBLE, TERRIBLE WOMAN
TOYING WITH EMOTIONS AND SUCH
but i'm quite proud of Cosima for being honest with Patrick before she got in even more deep with him (was that grammatically correct?), kudos to her! knowing myself, if i had both Patrick and Nash pursuing me, i would not have the self-control Cosima has to go for just one of them, hehehe

Cosmia, my goodness.

I stumbled across this story and read it all in one go. I'm torn though, Patrick is so sweet. He's has manners but you also showed how he's so trapped in a box and has never pressed out of it. I'm scared and sad that he's going to eventually get his heart broken. Just let me hug him when he does, please.
Nash is, I mean I get his whole caution over their age difference and the fact that Cosmia is his best friend's younger sister but he needs to stop. He needs to stop it with the mixed signals and just DO IT.

JUST DO IT NASH.