Cerberi - Comments

Maybe it's just me, but I feel like the sentence "It was early that second morning that my fragile world crumbled into a bloody heap around me." is out of place for your style of narration, since you have been telling this story in the present as things happening, without that knowledge of the future, if that makes sense
And I think you meant rogues here instead of Cerberi? ...spun to face the Cerberi headed for the window...
I'm actually glad that what's happening is happening - no doubt there will be a vicious fight for survival for the rest of the story. I really can't wait to see where you take it! Update soon!

Oh man! Where will they go next? Please keep updating can't wait for more!:)

Oh man! Where will they go now?? I'm glad u updated. Can't wait for more. :)

Oh man! Where will they go now?? I'm glad u updated. Can't wait for more. :)

Oh Jesus! That was...wow. God, I can't even imagine what this is going to mean for them. And I really hope Heath gives her the full story soon.

That took me for surprise! Can't see what happens next! So glad to see you're still updating, I absolutely love this story!!

That took me for surprise! Can't see what happens next! So glad to see you're still updating, I absolutely love this story!!

Well. I did not see that coming That really changes everything! As always, I'm hanging on for more, so please update soon with yet another amazing chapter!

Whatttttttt?!?! I can't believe it! Does that mean Heath has betrayed his father? Does he hate his father? Whhhhhaaaatttt?!?! Anyway, please update soon!!! :D

Okay, as soon as she wondered why he knew so much, alarm bells started ringing and I just knew he was going to be one of the kids he was telling her about! Well, that certainly adds a new dimension to the drama, doesn't it? I can't wait to see what happens next. There are so many places you could go with this tale, and I'm interested to see where your mind takes you!

I don't know if you want typos pointed out, but in - The only sounds heard as we traipsed to the center of the city was the soft puff of people exhaling into the frigid hair... - I think you meant 'air'
So annoyed about the new rules for the Cerberi, but maybe there's more to it than just the accident
They kissed! It was to tender, and then a crash just has to ruin their moment I don't know what happened, and I'm eager to find out, so please update soon! You know I love this story!

I know Cassie wants answers, but I think those are answers she's not really ready for. On the other hand, unless Heath and James are going to take responsibility for keeping her safe, they need to explain things to her! SO glad they finally kissed! Lol. At least one positive thing happened in this chapter, because the rest of this was just...whoa. Intense and scary and I am so happy that updates will be more frequent soon!

I love this story so much, everything about it is amazing. The original plot, the characters, your writing, I love it all. I read all the chapters you have posted in one sitting! I love Heath so much, and James is hilarious. Can't wait to see what happens after the kiss between Cassie and Heath, and what secret he's keeping from her!

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I liked the chapter - it had more of the developing feel to it rather than just a filler, which was great because it established that her and Heath share more of a friendship now. I really liked how you were saying that she felt raw and exposed from what her roommates did - it really enforced her fear of going back there, and I'm interested in seeing how her fear affects her performance as a Cerberus. Can't wait for the crazy next chapter, and I really hope you update soon! I love this story!

Ahh! Heath is so cute..I hope you keep updating.

Ahh! Heath is so cute..I hope you keep updating.

I like that her relationship with those guys has gotten a lot better and that Heath is helping her out. I just wish she could get some answers. I'm nervous about what comes next, because I know Cassie, Heath, and probably James aren't going to lie down and take this forever....

Heath is so fricking awesome. I wish I knew what he knew and if he loves Cassie. Please update as soon as you are able. Good luck on your tests! :)

I really just want to know what's going on!!! Why are they trying to kill her? And why is Heath so nice all of a sudden?!?!?!? But he is being very cute. Please update soon!!!! :D