July 24th, 2014 at 12:36pm
Oh my gosh. The summary drew me in immediately and I'm just really glad I read this. Reccing and subscribing.
I like how you don't give us the flashback until later. I love how you start out where Spencer returns home because it made me want to keep reading and it peaked my interest. Like, I was thinking why is Tristan being so distant with her sister? Why was Spencer living in Arizona? I also love the interactions between the sisters you have in the second chapter. I think you brought out their relationship well. It's definitely not your typical sisterly love - especially between identical twins. And then it's just the cherry on top with the third chapter explaining why they're so broken apart and why Spencer was gone for two years. I'm curious as to why she came back and I'm curious what their secrets were that Spencer said she couldn't keep if she stayed.
Update soon.
I really love it so far omg
I love all the characters (though Tris and Spencer especially ahaha) and I love the pacing of the story.
It's incredibly easy to read and it's not overwhelming - to be honest I feel like I could read it over and over again c: