Torn - Comments

@Kenarik I couldn't say it better myself. This is an unhealthy relationship.

Loving to story so far, and loving The Menzingers reference just as much. Can't wait for more!

I absolutely love the direction this story might be slowly taking. It's very original, unlike everything I've read so far on this website. Update soon :)

It looks like I'm not the only one to hear warning bells here. Brady is a controlling asshole. I hope she figures out who that bra really belongs to so she can get away from that toxic man.

Another fascinating chapter! I can't wait for the next one, either. She needs to do something about Brady. Loser. I can see why she's hesitating, but still... and James. Those eyes. My goodness. Update soon!

Love it! Keep up the amazing work!

It's just a matter of time before Brady really hurts her!!! I hope she gets out before that happens!!

I love this story♡ I can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of the story :) Although Brady is pissing me off, and I can just feel all of Anna's emotions. Ahh, the suspense.

As always love your stories. I'm really interested in how this will play out.

She needs to leave ASAP. Those signs she is feeling are huge. Don't doubt your instincts, more often then not they are right in situations like these.

Holy shit she's cheating on her ?!? I wonder if it's with anyone important. And the fact that he's so calm about it shows that he's an absolute psychopath. I want her to tell James so badly. And interesting how they both have 5
Letter names. MOREEEEE please ;)

If her blood runs cold at the touch of her fiance then she needs to run the other direction. Why didn't she tell James what was going on, even her best friend could tell things are not good. Not to mention the clear sign that her man was cheating on her.

If her blood runs cold at the touch of her fiance then she needs to run the other direction. Why didn't she tell James what was going on, even her best friend could tell things are not good. Not to mention the clear sign that her man was cheating on her.

Brady is an ass! Who cares if ur in a bad mood or have a terrible shift at work! You don't treat ur fiancé like that! And there is no such things as little crushes! She likes him! But Brady is going to be trouble! Interesting to see what happens next!

that was so sweet of his and James Neal couldn't be more adorable. And Anna clearly is feeling It too. Having a shitty day at work isn't an excuse to always do what Brady seems to be doing.

James Neal to the rescue!!!

It's never "just a little crush". Brady was an ass to her and I already know she deserves better. There will be more accusations by him, now to hope none of them come true until after she leaves him.

Wow. Another interesting chapter! Can't wait for more -- no pressure or anything!

If I had someone like Brady in my life, I wouldn't be able to handle it nearly as much as Anna does. I'm too emotional of a person. I give props to her. I just hope she gets out of there before things get worse.

Two updates in two days! Yay! Loving this so far. Very intrigued. I'll bet Brady is cheating on her right now. Guilt breeds suspicion and he's showing some serious cheater traits! Can't wait for more!