Broken Antlers - Comments

Describing Cersei's expression as sour is so spot on Oooooh a Valyrian bow??? I didn't see that coming, and I wonder where you'll take that! I could perfectly imagine Arya watching Gendry, and I'd love to see them interact so we can all enjoy how cute they are together Update soon!

Love it! I can't wait for the next one!

I was actually considering sending you to the Night's Watch for lack of updates I really liked the chapter! I don't have any feedback, just that it was enjoyable to read and that everyone seems in character, so it was great! Keep up the good work and update soon!

@ oberyn.angel

Yeah, I've always loved that Ned thought Gendry was Robert's in the show, and I wanted it to be like Gendry was legitimized. :)

I've got five more chapters written, but I have to edit them :)

Nice intro descriptions, as always, to set the scene
"Arya... Just be nice" So awesomely done.
Hmmm so Gendry is Robert's eldest son, that sure shakes things up and makes it interesting
Nicely done first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more!