Reminiscence, Keep Us Together - Comments

I really liked this, it makes me feel curious about what happened to them.

I think for your story title that you could get away with one or the other, so that it's not too long.

I like your writing style in this as well, how it feels more like a memory than it happening right then and there.

Like I've mentioned before just keep an eye out on your spacing when it comes to dialogue and then this chapter will be perfect ::thumbsup:

I think you could make a pretty good chapter story out of this. I say, follow your gut instinct.