Oh it’s Another Rainy Day (Another Excuse for Me to Fuck All Day) - Comments

everything that Lyra said below, because that's a damn near perfect comment, plus, wow, you are fucking incredible at adorably hilarious little asides. That one paragraph where Frank is all confused about the world because he's so turned on and he can only think of a few words? Of course one of them is pizza. What else would it be? I laughed so hard at that. You're wonderful. You've just won the award for my favorite mibba author, and favorite on-going-writing frerard author if that makes sense because you just have so many effing amazing stories. I'm excited to keep reading them:)

This is just so sweet and fluffy. It's nice to read a story like this, which is just kind of innocent (if, you know, you don't include the sex) and teenagery(yes, that's a word even if there is a red line under it).

The plot is great. A simple idea, but very well executed and originally done. Your characters are well developed, I love their progress throughout the story and their actions are just adorable and it so fits the characters. I like how things slowly spiral down a path you knew they were going to go down anyway, and it's not disappointing when it happens. Your paragraph about 'doing nothing' was brilliant, because it's so true. I say it all the time, even though I am in fact reading, or writing, or something. We rarely do nothing, and yet we act like we never do anything.

I love your use of vocabulary. You seriously make me feel ashamed of my writing abilities when on occasion I see a word you use and I'm like "what does that mean again?". You are one of those people that are just natural writers, which is why I am now catching up on your stories (what else would I do doing on a Saturday evening). I really, really enjoyed this. Well done on another wonderful piece of fiction.

First off: the gif made me audibly awe. Told my mom I saw a cute cat on the Interwebz.
Secondly: *incomprehensible whines*
Thirdly: so many mental images. I have a mental folder titled "Sexxy Faces wif Gee" which is not nearly as cute as "Cutsie Stuffs wif Fwankie" because *more incomprehensible noises*. You're killing me man.
Fourthly: butchering the Plain White T's lyric was totally worth it. Tom should be flattered, damnit.

I connected wildly when you said that Gerard has a mental folder in his brain labeled "Cutsie Stuff wif Fwankie" omigosh how cute.

Loved it! :)

Only half way thro but I love this story. Its awesome.

You never told me you posted! How dare you woman?
I love the light joking tone in the beginning and how flirty they act, even though they're already a couple. The buildup is insane though! Your reading and just thinking 'ok they're taking their clothes off, this is getting interesting - wha - oh Gerard doesn't have any underwear oh neither does Frank, time for them to Frickity frack (you know what I'm going on about) and nope. Just more and more buildup and teasing and ugh. But it was beautifully written, so I can't scold you (much). They're just so cute together! Your characters were brought up nicely and I can't wait for more of your work. Keep it up!

~Jazz