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SEQUELS SEQUELS SEQUELS

h0ly shit though like this is the best first time smut ive ever seen??? like and I stg I'm not even just sayin that like most people fuck it up so bad but ur perf so u didn't and just skioandbjslahbdjxka??? akfjkskdbisje.

oh also um ps maybe I'm late but yES PLS SECOnd parts, sequels all the way, g'bye

People keep asking me to do a smut like this, but for kellic, and I thought about it until I read this. This is way better than the idea I had for it. I loved it.

@ fagsgarth
why are you thanking me what did i dO

@ alltimetrotta
wah t its not even goOd

@ emilygrace0516
sH perfect is an overstatement

this was perfect and also second parts to both would be amazing

Getting off to this b y e

Hell yes this is perfect like oh shit I loved it thank you thank you

@ JamieAllOver.
I THOUGHT THAT'S WHERE YOU GOT THE IDEA OMFG that's weird

@ brxndneweyes
someone sent this to atff??
dAmn It i thought i was being original
yee i was reading through it after i was done with it and i kinda noticed how alex starts with the baby then jack does but it was like 2am and i didn't care and just wanted it up

omg i love this

aabsolutely love your updates every single damn time

aw yiss i wanted someone to write this when it was sent to atff but i cry because bottom!jack is my fave i was kinda expecting them to agree on like making out and fingering each other at the same time like two lesbians aaand now i want to write that great

i am rambling it was funny though i liked it (you used "baby" 59546219 times though) and i think a second bit to get naked would be good cos i liked the way viola lion ended on it's own

yes i actually was awake while i read this one and it was v good
ha ha ha ahahaha you're funny

@ jalex_barakarth3012
do you actually read these anymore bc this was terrible
and you say your stuff is bad so i can't trust your judgment

i'm laughing you said your smut got bad
this is not bad