h0ly shit though like this is the best first time smut ive ever seen??? like and I stg I'm not even just sayin that like most people fuck it up so bad but ur perf so u didn't and just skioandbjslahbdjxka??? akfjkskdbisje.
oh also um ps maybe I'm late but yES PLS SECOnd parts, sequels all the way, g'bye
People keep asking me to do a smut like this, but for kellic, and I thought about it until I read this. This is way better than the idea I had for it. I loved it.
@ brxndneweyes someone sent this to atff?? dAmn It i thought i was being original yee i was reading through it after i was done with it and i kinda noticed how alex starts with the baby then jack does but it was like 2am and i didn't care and just wanted it up
aw yiss i wanted someone to write this when it was sent to atff but i cry because bottom!jack is my fave i was kinda expecting them to agree on like making out and fingering each other at the same time like two lesbians aaand now i want to write that great
i am rambling it was funny though i liked it (you used "baby" 59546219 times though) and i think a second bit to get naked would be good cos i liked the way viola lion ended on it's own