Safe With You Beside Me - Comments

Totally loving this! I can't wait to find out what'll happen next. Please update soon xx

Maybe Brian can take in Jordan!!! And oh my god, Brian was all but naked....drools!!! Can't wait for more :)

oh gosh thanks for the image of brian in a jock-strap.. *thuds*
this is soooo good and the tension is so thick.. totally love it

@ akmo4725
I am super stoked that all of you guys were able to find this through the other story, thank you for commenting.

@ rachthebat.
I am so super stoked to be working with you, you have a great sense of wording for things that don't sound right and you are amazing with where commas need to go! That I think is my biggest problem, I realized going back through chapter 2 that a lot of the mistakes were misspelled words, I should have done a reread through it to find them first because I type so darn fast that I screw up a lot.

@ fiction246
Thank you! I am super stoked to bring this back! The revamps won't change much, but it will give a little more info and realism I think. I was going to entirely redo chapter 3 to end differently but I decided to change the story plot around and make something happen a lot later than I had planned, which will help keep the story around longer.

@ StacieIerogeance
I hope the adds are worth the reread. Thank you for the comment.

@ AJ9
Thank you! I am so happy that you guys like this, I have nearly a fourth of the readers that I had on the old one in just one night! I think I will do a weekly update, that way this will give me time to come up with the future chapters at least one ahead. I am going to start on the rewrite for chapter 3 tonight and maybe work on 4.

@ HanerJoy
I couldn't stand how the story seemed so fake before, I absolutely adore how it is turning out though. No more writing for me when I am super tired! That's when I seem to slack and leave out detail. Thank you for commenting and staying with this story even though its been so long since I've posted. Haha I hope the image sticks with you. I keep picturing him with his long hair, in a sleeveless black shirt and some sort of black pants, and eyeliner even though his character doesn't wear it. And a hat! Can't forget a hat!

I'm with AJ9 it was really good first but now is even better :D last part... now I have that image of Brian on my head lol I can't wait to read more :D

I'm glad you're rewriting it. It was good originally but this is so much better! I'm going to enjoy rereading this. Hope you can update again soon. Xx

yay i cant wait to reread it all over again

I'm glad this is back :) i look forward to seeing how you revamp it!!!

N'awww, you're most welcome! :) I've really missed this story, so getting to help you out with re-writing it, is an absolute pleasure!

I've just finished doing my beta thang on chapter 2, so it's all ready and waiting for you! :)

Awesome!! I was wondering where this story went!!! Can't wait for more!

@ acid_rain88
Thank you! I am super happy that it came out more realistic. I watch cop shows all the time and it was bugging me how fake the story was. Haha I say that but I dont even know if there is a bug testing body machine, I had to add that. I also like having more character background and this chapter came out pretty well. I am so excited to throw some cure balls in ther, I cant wait!

Chapter 2 is waiting a beta read so hopefuly it will be out soon.

liked the 1st version of this but the details of them doing all of the checking up at the police station and stuff instead makes it a little more real(?) i guess.. anyway this is great and can't wait to read more