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  • Amped.

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    First off, I just want to start off by asking 'why in the hell hasn't this story been updated since May?!' This is too good of a story to just not do anything with it! The way that you have captured Daryl's character is amazing! The bickering and southern slang is perfect. Secondly, I going to write some inspiring things:
    inspiring things
    Inspiring things
    Inspiring things.
    Please update, really, it would make a lot of people happy.
    December 11th, 2014 at 05:47pm
  • wolfgirl667

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    i love this story i need an update please
    June 12th, 2014 at 02:50am
  • JamieJo

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    Yay! Anabel is back and ready to fight! Bring on the walkers! Hahaha! Can't wait to see what happens next :3

    That meme was hilarious though xD
    May 20th, 2014 at 04:39am
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    Yay! Anabel is back and ready to fight! Bring on the walkers! Hahaha! Can't wait to see what happens next :3

    That meme was hilarious though xD
    May 20th, 2014 at 04:39am
  • JamieJo

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    Your writing, as always, was amazing. You really know how to tell a story and bring the reader into it. I loved Rick's little speech to Anabel, and of course Daryl and Anabel's bickering haha! Update soon!
    May 10th, 2014 at 06:15am
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    Oh the classic bickering between Daryl and Anabel during such unfortunate situations! Lol. I'm so glad Carl didn't run off like a dumbass! That was quite a cute little moment between Rick and Anabel.. almost like he's taking on that fatherly role for her? Aye? Hopefully they find Maggie and Glenn soon..

    As always, I love the way you write everything out so well. I can literally picture the imagery and just every scene in my head as if I were there. Perfection! :) and you are so sweet for the shoutout, omg!
    May 7th, 2014 at 04:12am
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    Oh the classic bickering between Daryl and Anabel during such unfortunate situations! Lol. I'm so glad Carl didn't run off like a dumbass! That was quite a cute little moment between Rick and Anabel.. almost like he's taking on that fatherly role for her? Aye? Hopefully they find Maggie and Glenn soon..

    As always, I love the way you write everything out so well. I can literally picture the imagery and just every scene in my head as if I was there. Perfection! :) and you are so sweet for the shoutout, omg!
    May 7th, 2014 at 04:12am
  • michellee

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    Holy shit. I did not see that coming even though it was going to happen eventually with the house getting overrun, but damn. No sympathy towards Shaun though! He should've redeemed himself long before. LOL jk. That was mean, but I hope Anabel and Carl don't get separated! Wonder what happened to Rick and them..

    Again, you are a superb writer and please update soon! The suspense is killing me!
    May 6th, 2014 at 06:26pm
  • jasminecheyanne

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    Dude this chapter was fucking intense! I think Shaun redeemed himself (: he didn't deserve to die ;-; and I really hope it's someone from the group at the end of the chapter instead of some walkers ready to rip off her arm xD update again whenever you can c: (:
    May 6th, 2014 at 05:24am
  • Niall James Horan.

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    I love it.
    May 2nd, 2014 at 09:04am
  • JamieJo

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    " "Good." He stated, looking away from me, he murmured, "Ya startin' to grow on me." "

    YEEEEEEE!!! <3<3<3 That part was pure perfection! I loved it, as always your writing was superb and I can't wait to read more :)
    May 1st, 2014 at 04:40am
  • JamieJo

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    OH NO!!! Whats happening with Anabell!!!!! D: Can't wait for the next chapter! And that meme was perfect haha xD
    April 30th, 2014 at 03:17am
  • michellee

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    OMG NO. I KNEW IT! Freakin' Luke and Harry. Bunch of pricks. They seemed way too fishy! I saw it coming with Luke, but Harry.. totally didn't expect him to be such an ass! I really thought he was the innocent one out of the two!

    I would love it from Daryl's view! It's always nice to know it from a guy's POV here and there. :) Keep up the good work, Kay! So loving this story! Amazeballs and totez loving the banner! Can't wait for the next update!
    April 23rd, 2014 at 08:48pm
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    OMG NO. I KNEW IT! Freakin' Luke and Harry. Bunch of pricks. They seemed way too fishy! I saw it coming with Luke, but Harry.. totally didn't expect him to be such an ass! I really thought he was the innocent one out of the two!

    I would love it from Daryl's view! It's always nice to know it from a guy's POV here and there. :) Keep up the good work, Kay! So loving this story! Amazeballs and totez loving the banner! Can't wait for the next update!
    April 23rd, 2014 at 08:48pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I Think a single chapter or two in Daryls pov wouldn't hurt, but I prefer either the OC's pov or 3rd person. Very Happy
    April 23rd, 2014 at 07:22am
  • whatshername924

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    I really really enjoy this story and it would be interesting to have Daryl's perspective but i think you should consider doing it in 3rd person? I dont know if you've done that already in this story but i always find that works best when you are portraying a character that is not your OC. Just a thought!
    April 23rd, 2014 at 05:43am
  • JamieJo

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    This chapter was just so good, I knew those two were no good but I did not see this coming!! I would love to read this from Daryl's view as well, that would be really interesting to see what's going on in his mind!
    April 23rd, 2014 at 03:59am
  • SaraHorlyk

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    Ah, I loved this chapter girl! Please update this soon again! :D
    April 22nd, 2014 at 07:26am
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    i loveeee this story so much, it has to be my favorite TWD story. Mr. Green Very Happy update soon!
    April 22nd, 2014 at 05:52am
  • jasminecheyanne

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    This story is so amazing dude, like seriously. This chapter was awesome *.* you're a badass writer :) The way you portray Daryl is perfection :) update again whenever you can c:
    April 20th, 2014 at 10:10pm