I HATE PITCH, HE NEEDS TO DIE OR GET THE F*** OUT.
Dude, I really hope you start this again soon! I have never read an Elsa/Jack Frost fanfic before and this one is getting exciting. I can't wait till Jack comes in ;)
Really great start, sure it's jumpy but it suits... I really like it, and I love that you included Pitch! I can't wait to see where you go with this and when Jack comes into the equation update soon :)
Dude, I really hope you start this again soon! I have never read an Elsa/Jack Frost fanfic before and this one is getting exciting. I can't wait till Jack comes in ;)