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  • maddiecaps

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    I love love love this. Can't wait to read more
    August 3rd, 2015 at 03:10am
  • kipderder

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    Well, I for one am intrigued. Interesting story line. Can't wait to see where this is headed. Please do continue! Mr. Green
    April 8th, 2014 at 08:53am
  • DustyMoose

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    I like the story so far, but something about it seems a little rushed. I think it would help grab more interest if you built up the characters more. But I hope you keep writing, I'm curious to see where it will lead ^.^
    April 8th, 2014 at 08:52am
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