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  • Sammy-Poo!

    Sammy-Poo! (100)

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    Just one thing, when there's two vowels beside each other like "a extended" it's supposed to be "an extended". As disturbing as that was, I really liked it haha.
    January 15th, 2015 at 05:35pm
  • Graffiti Kid

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    That...is seriously disturbing.
    October 30th, 2014 at 12:42am
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