May 19th, 2014 at 01:19am
anyway, i really love the short one-shot! i've never really read hayley portrayed as such a bitchy character that way, but then again i don't read much of paramore fics. with that being said, i think you made a really nice connection to the quote/title itself, and the character build up from the introduction definitely helps! you gave the characters a solid reason to depart without making them look to much like such dicks.
awesome!
Thank you so much for checking it out. I'm glad you liked it. This is the first time I've ever written Hayley as such a bitchy person, heck it's my first time ever writing anything about Paramore, so I'm glad you enjoyed it and it turned out alright.