I'm so sad and yet so happy altogether and no this should not be allowed.
Whilst I'm sad to see such a beautiful fiction come to an end, I'm so happy that they are together, because you built everything up to (I think it was) the third to last chapter when Pyro finally shed the shroud he'd held up all those years. I can't believe it's over, but with such a perfect ending. Your writing is so incredible, keep up the great work.
Nope, I refuse to believe that this fic will end. You can't just write that last chapter and yet be so chipper about its end.
It is so scary some of the emotions that you make me feel with your writing. You will not believe. I feel so bad for Alessandro. He's been waiting for this moment, where he could just... have Pyro, and this life with him. I also refuse that you won't let them be together, because Alessandro accepted him as he was, and you can't just ruin something like that for such a wonderful soul.
Well damn. Turn my life upside down with your words. Whatever. I won't lie, this update was so much different than what I thought it would be. But in a good way. And I'm happy for that. This update, man, was really pulled together. I liked it. I love this story. That was a shock
Okay, there is too much mystery behind Pyro that makes me so attracted to him. He's so many wonderful things, so many wonderfully dark things wrapped into one human being. Once again, a chapter that has me wondering....
Hmm, that interaction with the boy on the street. It showed a weaker side to Pyro than what we haven't seen. I like how you continue to make me wonder about the characters you have written so well. And that last line... hmm, it has me wondering now. You always have me on the edge of my seat.
Wow. At first I thought this was going to be a creepish stalker story about a criminal murderer who starts fires. BUT, it seems, as if, there may be a love plot? Hmmmmm... Either way, amazing.
There are so many little things that make me suspicious. I don't know how else to describe it. Nonetheless, I can't go assuming things about this because sometimes, things aren't as they seem. I like how much you say in so little words with Pyro. It makes him unique and I absolutely adore him. You really are a great writer, nevertheless. Keep up the great work.