Malkin - Comments

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@ MITCHEAE
Yeah she is emotionally cheating she needs to figure out what she wants to do lol

Nope cheating is bad, just break up with ben. Although she is already emotionally cheating

@ Thatmom
Who knows what will happen but I do want Malkin and Sophia together :-)

I really hope she follows her heart. Neither Ben or Oksana are their true loves!!

@ MITCHEAE
Thanks me to lol

Hope your wrist gets better

@ MITCHEAE
Oh I know you can get really attached to someone who saves your life or even supports you during a really big rough patch in your life. I've dealt with some heavy shit in my life and the friends who stood by me the whole time are really my saving grace. Sometimes writing to me is like therapy I like writing about flawed people they are far more interesting than perfect well balanced people lol I don't know I'm weird haha thanks for liking my story though I appreciate it :-)

No just sometimes the attachment people get for others who save their lives.

Your story is great.

@ MITCHEAE
do you mean my story goes overboard?

It's good. There is an emotional attachment formed between someone that saves someone else's life but it can sometimes go overboard.

@ MITCHEAE

Thank you I'm actually working on the next chapter right now but I keep getting distracted lol I know I need to concentrate lol

great chapter

@ Pensgirl212
Thanks I'm working on the next chapter right now :-)

It's really good. Keep it up please!

@ Pensgirl212
I did reply to you but apparently it didn't post thank you so much for taking the time to read my story :-D

@ Thatmom
@ MITCHEAE
Thanks :-)

Really good.

Great start!

Interesting so far. Would love to see where it's going. If I can make a suggestion though, try breaking up the story into smaller paragraphs so it's not one big paragraph. It will help make reading easier.