Insatiable. - Comments

First off, I really don't know a whole lot about Teen Wolf, so I apologize if any part of this comment seems weird because of that.

I thought the relationship between Stiles and Sky was interesting. It definitely had it's ups and downs, and I liked that you incorporated the prompt in there with Sky not really being able to control herself around him. You gave us a bit of background on Sky, but I would have liked to see more, since I think she's an OC? (Again, not really familiar with the show or fandom). There were a lot of cool dynamics in the relationship between Sky and Stiles, especially with him being the nogitsune (?) and adding that in on top of his regular emotions.

I also liked that you sort of explored the different friendships of Sky and the other characters. I felt like they all had really unique relationships which was cool to read.

There were quite a few spelling/grammar errors and words missing, so I would definitely go back and fix those things up.

Overall though, really interesting story! I enjoyed reading it even though I'm not part of the fandom

Daw :3 sky is like a big baby learning how to walk again (;
Keep it up love

Oh dear! Sky is stuck as her wolf huh? I'm sure Peter will never let her live that down and Scott too. I'm excited to see what will happen next.

Wow, evil Stiles is really working to make Sky's life hell. Poor girl can't catch a break.

I don't see how Sky has not attacked Stiles with love yet. I have to give her props, 'cause if I was her, Stiles wouldn't know what the hell hit him. I wonder if 'evil' Stiles will have a thing for Sky or not.

Ah if I was Sky, I think I would pretty much die >~<
Update ♡

i really enjoy this story :D
i believe it has a lot of potential plus its totally interesting with Sky being a pureblood werewolf, perfect plot

Gah! I wanna read more! I love Sky and Stiles friendship/relationship so far! I love Sky as a character as well, she seems sweet yet tough. Hope you update soon