Two Cans and a String - Comments

I adore your layout. It fits nicely with the plot. And the concept you got going on is too cute. I'm a sucker for a romantic

The first chapter was sweet and I couldn't stop smiling at the can-string thing going on. I love how you made the first couple of chapters focus on Imogen, developing her character carefully!

In chapter four where Jameson tried to ask Mo if her and his brother finally got together !!!!! EVERYONE WANTS THEM TOGETHER... including me

ahhhh Will to the rescue !!!!

And can I say how well you get into Mo's head. I mean, the way you've written about Mo feeling/acting towards Will is impressive

Rooftop/window meetings and conversations omg !!!! I can image the two of them sitting on the roof, eyes all hinted with affection ahh this story is too cute

Ready for an update when you are :-)

Oh this is really good. I can't believe I haven't found this sooner! It's such a light and easy read the kind I find in young adult romance novels.

I love your writing style and the character relationship development moves along at a nice steady pace. It's just such a cute relationship they have. Roof conversations, window conversations. WHY COULDN'T I HAVE THAT.

In the first few chapters, I felt like I already knew the characters without feeling like their "life stories" were being forced upon me to read in the chapters. There's an easiness about their friendship that is executed flawlessly.

I can't wait to read what is in store for Will & Imogen, where their lives take them and how their friendship survives / evolves.

Please keep the updates coming!

I'll admit that I'm a closet romantic and that was so beautiful. I want a Will of my very own. He just seems too perfect to be true.

I haven't read a story on mibba in a little over a year to be honest, but I will keep waiting for updates on this story. It's beautiful. Great work! :)

I haven't read this yet, but I'm definitely recc'ing and subscribing so that I can read it later. The plot sounds incredibly interesting, and I love your character's names.

I really like this story so far. Your style of writing is amazing and it feels like an actual novel. can't wait for more!!

This is very well written, and I quite enjoyed reading all five chapters. In these few updates, I have come to learn a lot about Will and Imogen. I love the juxtaposition of their characters, how by being opposite they go so well together. They have a very finely woven, intricate friendship that is beautiful and you present so easily to the reader that its almost like watching them together through a window. I look forward to seeing how you continue their friendship and where it, and the story, goes. Well done. :)

I think you're doing superbly so far!

@ semisweet.
Thank you! I just hope I'll go the picture justice.

I can't tell you how long I've been waiting for someone to write something inspired by that picture of the houses. I'm already hooked. This is beautiful.

@ ynggfvv
aw I love hearing this
thank you so much

Hooked in less that two sentences.