August 14th, 2015 at 02:39am
Oh this is really good. I can't believe I haven't found this sooner! It's such a light and easy read the kind I find in young adult romance novels.
I love your writing style and the character relationship development moves along at a nice steady pace. It's just such a cute relationship they have. Roof conversations, window conversations. WHY COULDN'T I HAVE THAT.
In the first few chapters, I felt like I already knew the characters without feeling like their "life stories" were being forced upon me to read in the chapters. There's an easiness about their friendship that is executed flawlessly.
I can't wait to read what is in store for Will & Imogen, where their lives take them and how their friendship survives / evolves.
Please keep the updates coming!
The first chapter was sweet and I couldn't stop smiling at the can-string thing going on. I love how you made the first couple of chapters focus on Imogen, developing her character carefully!
In chapter four where Jameson tried to ask Mo if her and his brother finally got together !!!!! EVERYONE WANTS THEM TOGETHER... including me
ahhhh Will to the rescue !!!!
And can I say how well you get into Mo's head. I mean, the way you've written about Mo feeling/acting towards Will is impressive
Rooftop/window meetings and conversations omg !!!! I can image the two of them sitting on the roof, eyes all hinted with affection ahh this story is too cute
Ready for an update when you are :-)