Call to You - Comments

Wow wow wow I feel like such crap for this comment because undoes I think should be undo and other than that, I have nothing. My mind is just blank and reeling at the utter strength and beauty of your words. I couldn't even point out a favorite phrase if I wanted to because those turned to sentences and those sentences ended up being favorite excerpts. Christ, this is just, this is. From "He whispers your name like, Hello, Regret." to the end, I just couldn't breathe; and before that, who knows how long I went without breathing.

This is perfection. This is feeling.

Every bit of this was lovely without needing to be a fan, every bit of this was grand despite words that went unrecognized - words that mean things to fans, you know? - this was just, ah I have no words for what this was. I could relate to this; I found myself remembering my own memories "When the earth bottoms out beneath you, what do you do?" - and then I found myself immersed in something else - in your writing. Disliking the POV wasn't even a thought in my mind when I read this because I was overcome with everything, every sense. This was damn beautiful. Something I'd quote and frame.

"When the earth bottoms out beneath you what do you do?"...The only thing I can do, feel my way. But this sight has left me at a loss. I keep getting notifications in my e-mail that that the prompt has been updated. I assume this to mean that there is a new one but I am having trouble finding them. The link, you know those blue words, bring me to things from four years ago. I am feeling my way, could you help me with this? I'm at a loss. Definitely NOT computer savvy.

I love this, so much. its perfect.