Beautiful Disasters - Comments

That wasn't the reaction I was expecting from Louis, after her hitting him.

Him locking her in a dark room that I would expect.

He is so hot and cold with her, no wonder she is confused.

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

@ madamUnco87
Even if I don't I might update again tonight anyway, I had so many feels with the next chapter! I can't wait for everyone to read it!!!! Thanks for commenting it always makes me smile. :)

I don't think he'll take the slap well, but seriously that boy needs a filter between his brain and his mouth. Of course she is going to look like that, she just found the closest person to all hurt.

I hope you get the three comments, really want to see the next chapter.

Really like this story, thanks for taking the time to update :-)

@ Jimungmung
Thank you sooooooo much!!!!! I will be updating both hopefully within the next two days or so!

I love these type of stories and I wish you would update on this story and the zany one. :)

So glad I found this story. I love it.

Never thought I'd ever read him saying sorry, miracles do happen ;)

Poor girl though, think I would have had a panic attack too.

Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for taking the time to update. Your writing is great :) :)

@ writing_wrongs
It wasn't your comment that upset me I actually had to delete a comment it was really mean! But I'm glad your enjoying the story. :)

I'm sorry if my comment upset you, I just wanted to make sure that wasn't what you were doing. I do enjoy the story though

@ writing_wrongs
I don't mean to seem like I am romanticizing abuse that is not my intent at all. She will have her time, there is a lot going on that you still don't understand seeing as I have only gotten a few chapters in. I hope you enjoy the story though and thanks for the feedback.

I would really like to see her stand up for herself a little more.

You really shouldn't romanticize abuse like this.

@ madamUnco87
Thanks for taking the time to comment it means a lot!

@ madamUnco87
Louis's softer side may be coming out soon, and Moni is an innocent bystander honestly she doesn't know much but she does date Liam so I can understand Faye's reluctance plus Faye doesn't want to make Moni feel bad about ditching her that night.

I would like to see Louis gentle side come out, if he has one!

I would have ran off to if I had seen someone get shot. I don't believe that Moni knew they were going to be there, she's too protective of Faye for that.

Great chapter, thanks for taking the time to update (:

So demanding he is!!

I like Moni, sounds like she is very protective of Faye.

I can't wait to read more, stories like this always suck me in.

Great chapter, thanks for taking the time to update (:

@ madamUnco87
Thank you! I've been feeling like i should write another and this idea just popped in my head, I love Louis haha I should have an update for this one and Unwanted and Obscure out by Sunday :)

This should be interesting, off to a good start!

Can't wait to read more (: