This could go somewhere, i like this piece please continue it:) i like your writing style and hope you could check out some of my stories for you to give me an opinion or advice
This could go somewhere, i like this piece please continue it:) i like your writing style and hope you could check out some of my stories for you to give me an opinion or advice
Alrighty let me see if I can offer some assistance for you. :) Since the chapter is all in bold I'd recommend putting [ / b ] (put those together I had to show them separately to show) at the end of Chase to get the regular font back again. Anywho actually on to the chapter itself. The detail and description was amazing! I could picture each room in my head and I'll agree with the pooch by saying that first room is too much pink for me. This story has captivated me thus far ladies let's see how this plays out.
Okies let's see here. Something tells me rooming with three guys is about as safe as going into a petting zoo with food in your pockets. I'm m also certain that if a snake started talking to me in my head I'd bolt to the next town over and hide in a bathroom until I was sure I was sane and not asking myself why a raven is like a writing desk. lol Great chapters ladies. Good show. Applause from me indeed.
Fucking A! I think my mind just exploded from the epicness of this chapter!! this chapter just threw me into a fit of uncontrollable laughter!! LOVED IT!!