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    Thank you very much :)
    April 27th, 2014 at 07:42pm
  • vanduo

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    Wow, this was short but impressive, I really enjoyed it, especially the ending! I also haven't stumbled upon any grammar mistakes and it made the reading only easier. All in all, great job!
    April 27th, 2014 at 07:40pm
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    Wow, this was short but impressive, I really enjoyed it, especially the ending! I also haven't stumbled upon any grammar mistakes and it made the reading only easier. All in all, great job!
    April 27th, 2014 at 07:40pm
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